The Black Knife, a poetry response to GDG writing prompt… by Stephen
Good Tuesday afternoon, Readers and Friends. Today I share my response to this weeks Go Dog Go Cafe Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge, “dangerous thoughts” provided by my dear friend Beth at Midwest Fantasy. Click the picture below to jump to the Cafe and take the challenge yourself or to just scroll around and read what has been shared.
A monarch butterfly dashes through the yard.
Sun has formed its wings, bleeding hot plasma
Into forged shapes of perfection: thin enough
To not call its flight back to ground, an Icarus,
Yet, strong to allow lift.
These are dangerous
Thoughts. Might I, like a monarch be, and dash
Through this field, molded plasmas of the sun
Lifting me off the ground yet always calling me
Back?
Yes… these thoughts endanger: I cannot
Fly now any more than I could when paraffin
Sealed gaps in a soul I cut just like my crayon
Art drawn on the sides of a bookshelf or too
White walls that invited some imagined hero
To slay imagined beasts for imagined damsels.
If
Like a monarch be, then my blood scores paper-thin
Glass with the black knife meant
To carve out the heart of the slain beast.
(C) 2020 Stephen Fuller
14 Responses to “The Black Knife, a poetry response to GDG writing prompt… by Stephen”
Black and imaginative dangerous thoughts Stephen…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Ivor!
LikeLike
Wonderful imagination.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Sadje!
LikeLike
Wow! The words just leap off the page. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love that it goes from something peaceful and gentle into the more adventurous and dangerous. Nicely done!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Rose, this was a fun prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It really was! I was sorry I didn’t have the time nor brain power for it myself!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Bleeping bad a** love the layout of the words 🤘
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awesome feedback, thanks MB!
LikeLike
[…] The Black Knife, a poetry response to GDG writing prompt… by Stephen […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
Starts out light then that deep, dark ending is amazing. You have such talent Stephen. Thank you!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Beth… in so many ways thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person