‘Night can feel cold in winter, not tonight though ‘ a first draft poem by S Francis

Tonight, though, the air outside spreads freshness
Leaves decomposing with fallen stalks in the fallow
Cornfield. I sit, camouflaged by brush I am just
Like this brush in winter. Waiting for spring to get my leaves
Waiting for summer to spit the seeds of my berry
On the ground. Where will I be then? Or even, what?
We take our rest here below the trees, the frost and
Biting wind not a part of this story, just us, detritus
Of another trip round the sun. We will sort it out.
Not right now. We will just sit here in the stillness, silent
Not needing the air inside, just this jam of freshness
To spread on the loaf of our lives, finally risen enough
To bake.
(C) 2019, S Francis Fuller
29 Responses to “‘Night can feel cold in winter, not tonight though ‘ a first draft poem by S Francis”
Beautiful! Loved this. Especially the last three lines.
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Thank you so much. π€ππ€
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No problem!
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Beautiful! Loved this. Especially the last three lines.
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Thank you so much. π€ππ€
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No problem!
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Really creative, I love it
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Thank you so much π€ππ€
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A story waiting to be told. But…
The last 3 lines – phenomenal!
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Thank you so much Eugenia π€ππ€
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Beautiful!
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Those last four lines especially…I so love the creative sentiment. And the stillness.
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Thank you, so much. The last lines have really resonated with people. I am going to look forward to working on this one in the next few weeks!
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You are very welcome!
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Don’t forget cake Mr S!! π°π
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lol
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I could do this all night…
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So there really is something to hieroglyphs. Egyptians were smart π΅οΈββοΈ
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Just ask king tut
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Beautiful! I love all the nature imagery! This poem really packs a punchβin a good way!
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Thank you so very much Rose. πππ
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You’re welcome!
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[…] Go Dog Go Cafe, I share with you a poem I will be working on over at Fullbeard Lit. This has been one of the most well received pieces since I began blogging again in December. I look forward to spending time with it, crafting it and […]
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